Little White Lies Review
Draft
Above is the final template review of our Short Film. The font and the positioning of the text boxes and text itself has been finalized, however - I was experiencing problems with regards to the image we used for the headline of the review.
The image kept becoming pixalated and would make the high quality reviews that white lies produce - appear tacky , therefore I will have to adjust this upon the start of term.
However, the image we chose to use is a clear representation of our protagonists costume, personality and hobby. She appears focused and aims to achieve in her love of football, and I feel that the image we have chosen to represent this achieves what messages we aim to put across to our audience.
Some improvements are needed in the final window - 2 weeks from now. Comments here are just on layout, as detail can't be seen alongside comments box. Check font sizes for heading lines. The ratings boxes - font for comments is wrong (italics needed and smaller font I think. The Anticipation rating needs something more typical of comments in this section - look at other examples again. Good effort though Holly, in very little time.
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